We provide feedback in our developmental reviews and beta reads, and also in our Story Guide and Story Architect packages. For fiction, this includes in-text comments for narrative mechanics, plot arcs, character development, story questions, theme, tone, and world-building. For nonfiction, this includes mechanics of the text, organization, argumentation, pacing, presentation of facts, and citations. If you have a specific area that you’d like us to focus on (e.g., dialogue), we can certainly accommodate!